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:bulletgreen::bulletgreen: 7/26: We're a week into app submissions. One more week to go! How is everyone's apps coming along? Just a reminder, you can note the group, or Saria and I individually for an app check if you are unsure about anything. I have plans for the opening celebration, so try and get your apps in asap for a surprise!

:bulletgreen: 7/21: We've officially opened EGO's OOC chatroom. Come join us! EchoesGateOnlineOOC


At long last, the wait is finally over! EGO is finally open for business!!

You can now submit your applications to the group. ***Please submit by clicking the "Join Our Group" button on the home page of EGO, and include a link to your application***. Applications will be accepted between July 18th, and August 1st, so those of you who haven't finished yet, you still have two weeks to finish! Then sooner you submit for review, the sooner we can get back to you if anything needs to be changed, and the more likely you will be accepted into the group. This is not first come first serve. We are judging not based on art skill, but effort, creativity and potential. Good luck!!!

Before submitting, please make sure you look over Rules and Guidelines and the How to Join! Journal entries. Reference ( X ) ( X )

On August 2nd, we will accept members and officially celebrate Echoes-Gate-Online's Grand opening!



Application Dealine: August 1, 11:59PM

Please let me know right away if you're having issues with joining the group.
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:iconsahara-chan:
Sahara-chan Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Professional General Artist
Looks good to me too! Good work.
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Saria-Sama Featured By Owner 4 days ago
Your app looks fine. For now I'll say it's ok, but we'll wait till Sahara has a look at it in case she sees anything that needs to be fixed. But I think it should be fine I'll give it a pass.
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ChikyShiro-Tan Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
bUILDS A CAMP UP HERE AND TRIES TO LINEART MY SKETCH 
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Sahara-chan Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Professional General Artist
*Cheers you on*
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JellyTart Featured By Owner Edited Jul 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Umm... I finished my app.. ;; is this okay? 
jellytart.deviantart.com/art/E…

I'm also sorry of its not digital, I'm visiting my relative's house and I don't have my laptop with me ;;
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Sahara-chan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Professional General Artist
Hey there! Don't worry about it not being digital. All we care about if that you made a character to you best of your abilities!

Now here's the part I hate to do... You app is a good start, but there are some things that conflict with the group's rules and guidelines. First of all, everyone starts at level 0 because the 'game' hasn't even started yet, so all characters are required to be a Recruit, and wield a Knife. (Don't worry, everyone will get a class and better weapons soon! This is just for the beginning.) You already have a lot of in game back story which just isn't possible. The idea is that everyone starts with a clean slate and builds their character's story with other members in the group!

Secondly, in the character creation guidelines, we stated that characters have realistic hair and eye colours. As AWESOME as it would be, purple hair isn't exactly realistic. Since she's Japanese, she should have black or dark brown hair naturally. Without having to change Miyuki's backstory too much, she could have maybe blonde or light coloured hair if you give a believable explanation. One example I can think of is in the manga/anime Peach Girl, where a girl named Momo had tanned skin and light reddish hair because it was bleached from chlorine from swimming all the time, and she was teased for being a Ganguro. Also perhaps you could mention a bit in her history as to how she got into online gaming. Creativity is yours! Just make it believable!!! O v O

Lastly, we're inspired by Sword Art Online and other things, but we never said this was SAO, lol. Saria and I never made any mention of being 'trapped' in the game!

Please reread the journal posts, especially Rules and Guidelines (Here: echoes-gate-online.deviantart.… ) and tweek some of the bio and I think you're set! If you're really stuck here are Saria and my apps for reference. echoes-gate-online.deviantart.… echoes-gate-online.deviantart.…
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JellyTart Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Okay :) sorry, I just skimmed through it, lol. I'll edit it and make it realistic! Thanks for the corrections!
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Sahara-chan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Professional General Artist
That's okay! Lol I know it's a lot to read. I look forward to the updated version!
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